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Have you ever experienced a similar situation where someone lost their temper at work? How did you h

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I've had an experience.
When it was my last year at school, I posted an important report to my supervisor.
I was on my way home from work after posting the report, but when I got a call from my supervisor, he got angry that the important document was wrong.
I was embarrassed and didn't know what to do, but as soon as I got to work tomorrow, I checked the documents and replied that I would process them first and give them to you again, and as soon as I got to work, I checked the documents as I promised.
As it turned out, I filled in the important figures of the documents incorrectly, as soon as I checked, I made the documents again and submitted them to my supervisor.
As I submitted, I told my supervisor, "I filled in the wrong numbers. I'm so sorry. But I'm glad you checked again and found my mistake, and I was able to prevent any big errors. Thank you."
That's when I realized that anyone can make a mistake, and if they do, it's important to acknowledge and apologize quickly.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Yun. You handled the situation very well. I love your mindset about owning up to one's mistakes and responsibilities in order to not make the problem a bigger issue. I love it. Well done, Yun! Thanks for this as well. Have a great day! :)
~T. Jade^^
I've had an experience.
>> Correct
When it was my last year at school, I posted an important report to my supervisor.
>> Correct
>> OR: During my last year at school, I submitted an important report to my supervisor.
I was on my way home from work after posting the report, but when I got a call from my supervisor, he got angry that the important document was wrong.
>> Correct
>> While I was on my way home from work after submitting the report, I received a call from my supervisor. He was upset because the important document contained errors.
I was embarrassed and didn't know what to do, but as soon as I got to work tomorrow, I checked the documents and replied that I would process them first and give them to you again, and as soon as I got to work, I checked the documents as I promised.
>> Correct
>> OR: Feeling embarrassed and unsure of what to do, the next day when I arrived at work, I promptly reviewed the documents. I assured my supervisor that I would reprocess and resubmit them. I fulfilled my promise and rechecked the documents upon reaching the office.
As it turned out, I filled in the important figures of the documents incorrectly, as soon as I checked, I made the documents again and submitted them to my supervisor.
>> Correct
>> OR: Upon reexamination, I realized that I had entered the crucial figures incorrectly. Consequently, I remade the documents and promptly resubmitted them to my supervisor.
As I submitted, I told my supervisor, "I filled in the wrong numbers. I'm so sorry. But I'm glad you checked again and found my mistake, and I was able to prevent any big errors. Thank you."
>> Correct
>> OR: Upon submission, I informed my supervisor, "I entered the wrong numbers. I apologize for the error. I appreciate your reevaluation, which enabled me to rectify my mistake and prevent any significant errors. Thank you."
That's when I realized that anyone can make a mistake, and if they do, it's important to acknowledge and apologize quickly.
>> Correct
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