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Hi.
First, I am sorry to say this word everyday thesedays, but I can't stand but telling you.
There were too many strange patients' calls at the clinic.
One was a person who wanted to get a prescription instead of her son.
It's illegal to give a prescription to other person instead of the patient.
She knew it, but she begged me to do that continuously, because her son is in the army.
Anyway, I told her that I can't do that and her son can see a doctor in the army.
Another one was also a mother.
Her son seemed to have an acne on his face, and she wanted her son to see a doctor, but he didn't want it.
Her son is not a baby, and I am not his father.
I can't understand this situation.
This phenomenon was caused by excessive protection, I think.
In addition, there were many mistakes on our staff.
I had a terrible expression on my face all day, so Dr.MJ gave me a sweet drink to comfort me, and it worked fortunately.
My wife prepared a corn bread which is my favorite, so I'll be better.
See y

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Good evening, Dr. Kim!

It is alright to vent on these cases. They are very interesting, actually.  The strange calls today are mostly from mothers who either cared too much of pamper too much.  Nonetheless, rules are rules and if you break them, it causes a chain reaction until  habitually, crossing the line is just going to be your standard and you do not want that as a professional.

Today, you needed a chill pill instead of Dr. MJ. Perhaps, since you read his message at 3am today, you could not help but be bothered by the continuous nagging about the daily profit. These are out of your control. Diversifying and working on your strengths in franchising, and other sources of revenue would be good if you are not working full time. Thus, manage your finances to the optimum  level.

In the clinic today, you were Dr. MJ and Dr. MJ was you. That is some good balance once in a blue moon. 

Enjoy your wife's corn bread. It must smell divine.

Thanks for sending this homework early. You had very good sentences and very good patterns you have used. As you can see, 90% of them are correct. Keep up the high frequency of correctness.

See you tomorrow. 

-T. Donna~

Hi.
>> Correct!

First, I am sorry to say this word everyday thesedays, but I can't stand but telling you.
>>First, I am sorry to say this word everyday these days, but I can't stand but tell you. 

There were too many strange patients' calls at the clinic.
>> Correct!

One was a person who wanted to get a prescription instead of her son.
>> Correct!

It's illegal to give a prescription to other person instead of the patient.
>> It's illegal to give a prescription to another person instead of the patient.

She knew it, but she begged me to do that continuously, because her son is in the army.
>> Correct!

Anyway, I told her that I can't do that and her son can see a doctor in the army.
>> Correct!

Another one was also a mother.
>> Correct!

Her son seemed to have an acne on his face, and she wanted her son to see a doctor, but he didn't want it.
>> Correct!

Her son is not a baby, and I am not his father.
>> Correct!

I can't understand this situation.
>> Correct!

This phenomenon was caused by excessive protection, I think.
>> Correct!

In addition, there were many mistakes on our staff.
>> In addition, there were many mistakes made by our staff.

I had a terrible expression on my face all day, so Dr.MJ gave me a sweet drink to comfort me, and it worked fortunately.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!

My wife prepared a corn bread which is my favorite, so I'll be better.
>> Correct!

See you.
>> Correct!
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