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A Famous Person You Admire

작성자: 이*성
2023-12-04 3065

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I admire our former president Ro Mu Hyun. He committed suicide 5/23, 2009. He was the president of Korea 2003~2008. During his time my age was 42-47. Most Korean president were high class level class. However, he was from rural area and graduated a commercial high school. He became a lawyer and politician. He had been failed so many elections, such as a member of the National Assembly or governor. Many people had a feeling of sorry for his foolish which he didn’t follow short interest than the highest duty. After his duration, his political enemies harassed him and his family obstinately and continuously.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there! Thank you for sharing your composition, Harrison! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Great job on selecting a famous person you admire. Keep up the good work.

^^T.JAMIE



I admire our former president Ro Mu Hyun. 

>>CORRECT
OR >> I hold great respect for our ex-president Roh Moo-hyun.


He committed suicide 5/23, 2009. 

>> He committed suicide on May 23, 2009.


He was the president of Korea 2003~2008. 

>> He was the president of Korea from 2003 to 2008.


During his time my age was 42-47. 

>> During his time, my age was between 42 and 47.


Most Korean president were high class level class. 

>> Most Korean presidents belonged to the upper class.


However, he was from rural area and graduated a commercial high school. 

>> However, he was from a rural area and graduated from a commercial high school.


He became a lawyer and politician.

>> CORRECT 
OR >> He became a lawyer and politician, dedicating his career to both the legal profession and public service.


He had been failed so many elections, such as a member of the National Assembly or governor. 

>> He had failed in many elections, such as running for a seat in the National Assembly or for the position of governor.


Many people had a feeling of sorry for his foolish which he didn’t follow short interest than the highest duty. 

>> Many people felt sorry for his foolishness for not prioritizing his duty over short-term interests.


After his duration, his political enemies harassed him and his family obstinately and continuously.

>> After his term, his political enemies persistently and continuously harassed him and his family.


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