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I can't describe it!Because I saw the sunset a long time ago.I'm sorry...

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Hi, Ji Ho!
It was surprising to find out that you hadn't seen a sunset in a long time. Either you arrive home early or you leave after sunset. Sunset is one of the most lovely nature scenes I enjoy staring at. It turns the sky golden orange or, on rare occasions, pink. It's relaxing for me, but it also means the day is almost over. However, it is also a reminder that tomorrow is another day. ^_^
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