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Tell me about residence hotel. Can you tell me any roles and responsibilities of the hotel as public

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회원님의 영작문

Tell me about residence hotel.

We can call them by life style accommodation.
The functions of the residence hotel included apartment and hotel as well.
Originally the hotels have no any functions for cooking inside, but residence hotels have.
The residence hotels are useful for people who want to stay for a long time, particularly good for business travelers.


Can you tell me any roles and responsibilities of the hotel as public institution.

The hotel infrastructures can be useful for any public occasions which were held by government.
Let's say there will be meeting with 2 presidents between Korea and America in Korea.
Preparing such a big event would be very important such as accommodations and meeting rooms and restaurants.
The hotel facilities can handle all of them and have responsibility to proceed with them as assistant.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Han! 
When we say public institution, we imply that you provide access to everybody, from any sector or class. Even though we use the term "public," the hotel's roles and responsibilities remain the same: to provide excellent and equal service while also ensuring safety and security. 
A residential hotel is also known as an apartment hotel. It combines the services and amenities of a hotel with the space and privacy of a home. Guests usually stay for a minimum period of one month and up to two years and this is commonly for business travelers or people who tend to study outside their country. 
-Chammy
Tell me about residence hotel.
>>Tell me about the residence hotel.
We can call them by life style accommodation.
>>We can call them lifestyle accommodation.
The functions of the residence hotel included apartment and hotel as well.
>>The residence hotel could function as an apartment and hotel.
Originally the hotels have no any functions for cooking inside, but residence hotels have.
>>Originally the hotels had no functions for cooking inside, but residence hotels have.
The residence hotels are useful for people who want to stay for a long time, particularly good for business travelers.
>>Correct
Can you tell me any roles and responsibilities of the hotel as public institution.
>>Can you tell me any roles and responsibilities of the hotel as a public institution?
The hotel infrastructures can be useful for any public occasions which were held by government.
>>The hotel infrastructures can be useful for any public occasions which were held by the government.
Let's say there will be meeting with 2 presidents between Korea and America in Korea.
>>Let's say there will be a meeting of 2 presidents from Korea and America in Korea.
Preparing such a big event would be very important such as accommodations and meeting rooms and restaurants.
>>Preparing for such a big event would be very important such as accommodations and meeting rooms and restaurants.
The hotel facilities can handle all of them and have responsibility to proceed with them as assistant.
>>The hotel facilities can handle all of them and have the responsibility to assist them.
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