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Tell me about MICE industry.

작성자: 정*환
2023-12-04 696

회원님의 영작문

I have only 12 days for the interview. So I checked all of the reviews on the website.
I was able to find 5 more questions however I fell in serious tension because of the difficulty.
I imagined how did I feel if this was actual interview and got the questions like this.
That made me feel more nervous and reduce my confidence.
But who knows about future's things? I believe if I think about those questions with you, it seems like I can make up for it.
Thank you Chammy.

Tell me about MICE industry.
It is the abbreviation for Meeting, Incentive, Convention, Exhibition.
That industry based on business to business compared to general tourism industry which is based on business to consumer.
So it can create added value highly than others.
MICE industry could be good elements to earn international money, and advertisement for the city.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there, Han!
You may consider reading the gathered ideas below. I think this one is easier to understand and simpler to discuss in line with the topic. 
MICE is an acronym for meetings, incentives, conferences, and exhibitions. It refers to the business that involves organizing, conducting, and attending business and leisure events. MICE acts as a strategy for hotels to make the most of their quieter times by hosting big meetings, conferences, and events. These events bring in lots of people during periods when the hotel is usually less busy, filling up rooms and spaces that would otherwise be underused. MICE is an event-organizing industry but also an important part of global business travel because events invite people from different places to attend, learn, and share ideas. 
~Chammy
I have only 12 days for the interview. So I checked all of the reviews on the website.
>>I only have 12 days before the interview. So I checked all of the reviews on the website.
I was able to find 5 more questions however I fell in serious tension because of the difficulty.
>>Correct
I imagined how did I feel if this was actual interview and got the questions like this.
>>I imagined how would  I feel if this were in the actual interview and got the questions like this.
That made me feel more nervous and reduce my confidence.
>>That made me feel more nervous and reduced my confidence.
But who knows about future's things? I believe if I think about those questions with you, it seems like I can make up for it. Thank you Chammy.
>>But who knows about future things? I believe if I think about those questions with you, it seems like I can make up for it. Thank you Chammy.
Tell me about MICE industry.
>>Tell me about the MICE industry.
It is the abbreviation for Meeting, Incentive, Convention, and Exhibition.
>>Correct
That industry based on business to business compared to general tourism industry which is based on business to consumer.
>>That industry is based on business-to-business compared to the general tourism industry which is based on business-to-consumer.
So it can create added value highly than others.
>>So it can create added value more highly than others.
MICE industry could be good elements to earn international money, and advertisement for the city.
>> The MICE industry could be a good element to earn international money and advertisement for the city.
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