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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the pros and cons of spending holidays with your family, with your friends, or alone?

There are many people at the end of the year or the beginning of the year, various gatherings are held using holidays.
For example, there are many gatherings such as school reunion meetings.
In my case, I like to spend time alone or really close friends on holidays.
But, sometimes when I meet or eat with less close friends, the atmosphere is awkward and feel uncomfortable.
For example, I sometimes attend to school reunion meeting.
It's been so long since I met school friends, so it's feel uncomfortable.
So, gatherings with close friends or family are more fun than such as school reunion meeting.
It's not a waste of time to me.
But, it's not easy to adapt due to my personality

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the pros and cons of spending holidays with your family, with your friends, or alone?


There are many people at the end of the year or the beginning of the year, various gatherings are held using holidays.
>> There are many people at the end of the year or the beginning of the year, various gatherings are held through holidays.
For example, there are many gatherings such as school reunion meetings.
>> CORRECT!
In my case, I like to spend time alone or really close friends on holidays.
>> CORRECT!
But, sometimes when I meet or eat with less close friends, the atmosphere is awkward and feel uncomfortable.
>> But, sometimes when I meet or eat with less close friends, the atmosphere is awkward and uncomfortable.
For example, I sometimes attend to school reunion meeting.
>> For example, I sometimes attend school reunions.
It's been so long since I met school friends, so it's feel uncomfortable.
>> It's been so long since I met school friends, so it feels uncomfortable.
So, gatherings with close friends or family are more fun than such as school reunion meeting.
>> So, gatherings with close friends or family are more fun than school reunions.
It's not a waste of time to me.
>> CORRECT!
But, it's not easy to adapt due to my personality.
>> CORRECT!
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