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Pick someone you love. What does that person look like?
My parents look like pretty and cool. They are so kind. My mom looks like rabbit! My dad looks like dog! I love my parents.

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Hi there Ann~!^^ It's great to know that you're always enthusiastic when completing your writings! I will miss you in class! Enjoy your vacation!
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My parents look like pretty and cool.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 They are so kind. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
My mom looks like a rabbit! 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
My dad looks like a dog!
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 I love my parents.
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