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What are the disadvantages of technology for you?

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As advance of a technology, someday we may forget our memory ability.
In the past, memory skill is important. but these days, memory skill isn't important.
Because, we can find easily many information through the internet.
These days, ability of using information is more important than memory.

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As advance of a technology, someday we may forget our memory ability.
>>With the advanced technology that we have nowadays, I believe that someday we may forget to use our knowledge in doing some things. 


In the past, memory skill is important. 
>> In the past, having your skill and knowledge is very important. 

but these days, memory skill isn't important.Because, we can find easily many information through the internet.
>> However, these days, people tend to let the technology and internet do the job.


These days, ability of using information is more important than memory.
>> Lastly, I believe that the knowledge of using the advanced technology is more important these days rather than learning how to do it by ourselves. 
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