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I think my first impression is not bad.
When I prepared a job interview, I met a lot of people to prepare together and they told me about my first impression in a good way. They said that I look like a kind and trustful person. And I always try to give good image to other people who I met first. But I think it is not only an important thing, so I always try to be kind and positive.

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Good day to you, Dami!

Making a first impression is valuable. If people's first impression of you is that you are friendly, competent, and trustworthy, they are more likely to feel comfortable around you. Thus, it can make or break an opportunity.

My first impression about you was that you looked like an actress, you are so humble and easy to get along with. You have a light personality that makes people speak with you with comfort. You also have a captivating smile.

Here on your composition, we can see that you have a very good number of correct sentences. Keep it up and get better each time!

See you later in class.

-T. Donna~

I think my first impression is not bad.
>> Correct!

When I prepared a job interview, I met a lot of people to prepare together and they told me about my first impression in a good way. 
>> When I prepared for a job interview, I met a lot of people to prepare together and they told me about my first impression in a good way. 

They said that I look like a kind and trustful person. 
>> Correct!

And I always try to give good image to other people who I met first. 
>> And I always try to give good image to other people who I meet first. 
Or: And, I always try to give a good image to other people who I meet first. 

But I think it is not only an important thing, so I always try to be kind and positive.
>> Correct!
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