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It is truly hard for me to stay calm and focused during conflicts rather than expressing anger.
Being consumed with anger caused me to relieve stress immediately, so the results were not good, even negative.
After I've experienced a lot of negative effects, I've become focused on fact, not emotion and think about logical sentences to convey to others.
As having conversation after a certain amount of time affects positive effects not only me but also other people, we can fluently resolve conflcts.

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Thank you for your homework, Yu Jin!

Keep going and never stop learning!

-Hanna ^^

It is truly hard for me to stay calm and focused during conflicts rather than expressing anger.

>>Correct.
Being consumed with anger caused me to relieve stress immediately, so the results were not good, even negative.

>>Being consumed by anger provides immediate stress relief but often leads to negative outcomes.
After I've experienced a lot of negative effects, I've become focused on fact, not emotion and think about logical sentences to convey to others.

>>After experiencing the negative effects of this approach, I shifted my focus to facts rather than emotions, taking the time to think about logical sentences to convey my thoughts to others.
As having conversation after a certain amount of time affects positive effects not only me but also other people, we can fluently resolve conflcts.

>>Engaging in conversations after allowing for a certain amount of time has positive effects not only on me but also to other people as we give fluent resolutions to conflicts.

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