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Why is it important to know the strengths and weaknesses of an individual? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.

Because I can live my life brightly when I know my strengths and weaknesses. More I make up for my weaknesses and reinforce my strengths, more I become a good person. So, I will take a note the content that living my life to know me more carefully. And I will listen to other people¡¯s opinion to expand my thoughts.

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Hello Ku Tae! I agree that we need to know our strengths and weaknesses. We are not born perfect, we have to accept the qualities and abilities we have. We will talk about this in class. Stay warm and safe!~T. Lyn
Because I can live my life brightly when I know my strengths and weaknesses. 
>>This is because we can live a bright life only if we know our strengths and weaknesses. 
More I make up for my weaknesses and reinforce my strengths, more I become a good person.
>>The more I complement my weaknesses and strengthen my strengths, the better I become.
So, I will take a note the content that living my life to know me more carefully. 
>>So, in order to get to know myself more in detail, I will try to record my life.
And I will listen to other people¡¯s opinion to expand my thoughts.
>>And I will listen to tother people's opinions and broaden my thinking.
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