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What\'s the difference between motel and hotel?

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2023-11-30 786

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Chammy, do you remember that I tried to say some word whose spelling started from "infra..."
That was infrastructures. HaHa.
I prepared 2 answers. If you think I lack my answers, please don't hesitate to add them.
Thank you.

What's the difference between motel and hotel?
Facilities are different between them. Motels are available for people who want to stay only.
However hotels have diverse infrastructures such as not only the rooms but also sauna, swimming pool, restaurants.
And the fee for motel are generally resonable compare to the hotel.
In addition, to define the motel, it could be abreviation for motorist and hotel.
Motel appeared for the motorist who want to stay and park easily while traveling.

Why do you think most of hotels are located in Seoul?
The reason why most of hotels are located in Seoul is because of its damand.
As everybody knows Seoul has many tourist attractions and populations.
Particularly, most of business are focused on Seoul.

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강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Han!
Your answers were absolutely on point! ^____________^
-- Motels are made to accommodate guests who may only be staying for one or two nights, they often provide a minimal standard of lodging along with a few basic amenities. And therefore, the rates are cheaper. It was originally a Motor Hotel designed for persons traveling by automobile, with easy access to motorway junctions.

While Hotels provide more care and hospitality than just lodging. They are usually located in the city centers. They offer a variety of facilities such as fitness centers, saunas, laundry services, and swimming pools.

-- Most of the hotels are found in Seoul because the city attracts a large number of visitors for a variety of purposes. As everyone knows, Seoul has numerous tourist attractions, consumers, and businesses, therefore the demand for hotels is stronger, and thus greater demand for hotels and an increased probability that they will be booked. 
~Chammy
Chammy, do you remember that I tried to say some word whose spelling started from "infra..."That was infrastructures. HaHa.
>>Chammy, do you remember when I tried to say a word beginning with "infra" ..."That was infrastructure. HaHa.
I prepared 2 answers. If you think I lack my answers, please don't hesitate to add them.Thank you.
>> I prepared 2 answers. If you think I missed a few things, please don't hesitate to add them. Thank you!
What's the difference between motel and hotel?
Facilities are different between them. Motels are available for people who want to stay only.
>>Correct
However hotels have diverse infrastructures such as not only the rooms but also sauna, swimming pool, restaurants.
>>However hotels have diverse infrastructures not only the rooms but also the sauna, swimming pool, and restaurants.
And the fee for motel are generally resonable compare to the hotel.
>> And the fees for a motel are generally reasonable compared to the hotel.
In addition, to define the motel, it could be abreviation for motorist and hotel.
>>In addition, to define the motel, it is the abbreviation for motor and hotels.
Motel appeared for the motorist who want to stay and park easily while traveling.
>> A motel appeared for the motorist who wants to stay and park easily while traveling.

Why do you think most of hotels are located in Seoul?
>>Why do you think most of the hotels are located in Seoul?
The reason why most of hotels are located in Seoul is because of its damand.
>>The reason why most of the hotels are located in Seoul is because of its demand.
As everybody knows Seoul has many tourist attractions and populations.
>>Correct
Particularly, most of business are focused on Seoul.
>>Particularly, most businesses are focused in Seoul.
So it is also good place for business trip. 
>> So, it is also a good place for business trips. 
Because many people visit Seoul for many reasons, most of hotels are located in Seoul.
>>Because many people visit Seoul for many reasons, most hotels are located in Seoul.


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