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What strategies do you find most effective in addressing conflicts with others?

작성자: 이*윤
2023-11-30 944

회원님의 영작문

From my experience, the most effective strategies for addressing conflicts with others are conversation and good listening.
Due to my personality, if something is wrong, I will solve problems with conversation every time, and do not hurt each other's feelings.
But, at this time, I should not criticize the others or hurt them with bad words.
It is also important to listen to what the others have to say to me beacuse it can relieve your feelings and give me helpful feedback.
In most case, this smooths out the conflict, but sometimes there are people who don't fit in well with me.
I recommend people who don't fit in with me to keep enough distance.
And there may be people who don't like me for no reason or just for "just" reasons.
I just have to ignore them without worrying too much.
Because those people are the ones looking for a reason to hate me even if I'm nice to them.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning, Yun. Your insights on dealing with conflicts are really thoughtful. I like how you emphasize conversation and listening; that's a great way to build understanding. Your approach of not criticizing or using hurtful words shows a lot of maturity as well. You are indeed a kind and wise person. Nice thinking, Yun! Thanks for this. Have an amazing day ahead! Enjoy your day. <3
~T. Jade^^
Homework: What strategies do you find most effective in addressing conflicts with others?
From my experience, the most effective strategies for addressing conflicts with others are conversation and good listening.
>> Correct
Due to my personality, if something is wrong, I will solve problems with conversation every time, and do not hurt each other's feelings.
>> Due to my personality, if something is wrong, I will solve problems with conversation every time and not hurt each other's feelings.
But, at this time, I should not criticize the others or hurt them with bad words.
>> Correct
It is also important to listen to what the others have to say to me beacuse it can relieve your feelings and give me helpful feedback.
>> It is also important to listen to what others have to say to me because it can relieve my feelings and provide helpful feedback.
In most case, this smooths out the conflict, but sometimes there are people who don't fit in well with me.
>> In most cases, this smooths out the conflict, but sometimes there are people who don't fit in well with me.
I recommend people who don't fit in with me to keep enough distance.
>> Correct
>> OR: I recommend that people who don't fit in with me keep enough distance.
And there may be people who don't like me for no reason or just for "just" reasons.
>> Correct
I just have to ignore them without worrying too much.
>> Correct
Because those people are the ones looking for a reason to hate me even if I'm nice to them.
>> Correct
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