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How important is food to health? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
I think food is very important to our health. Because food causes various diseases like cancel, skin trouble. So, we have to eat eco-friendly foods, not junk food. But throughout one¡¯s life we face the situation that has a no other choices to eat various food. So, we have to do the best to eat healthy foods.

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Hello Ku Tae, beautiful day to you! I totally agree with. We have to be careful about the food we eat because most of it is not good for our heath. We should only eat healthy foods such as fruit and vegetables, not junk foods. We will talk more about this matter in class. Keep safe! ~T. Lyn
How important is food to health? 
>>Correct.
Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
>>Answer in five sentences.
I think food is very important to our health. 
>>Correct. or I believe food is very important to our health.
Because food causes various diseases like cancel, skin trouble. 
>>This is because food causes various diseases, such as cancer and skin problems.
So, we have to eat eco-friendly foods, not junk food. 
>>So, we should eat eco-friendly food and not junk foods.
But throughout one¡¯s life we face the situation that has a no other choices to eat various food.
>>However, as we go through life, we face situations where we have no choice but to eat a variety of foods.
So, we have to do the best to eat healthy foods.
>>Therefore, we should do out best to eat health food.
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