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The cause of conflict

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I believe that the seed of conflict is started from the assumption that my opinion is correct and opposites are inccorect.
We can prevent small arguments from being emotional conflicts by listening to opposite opinion with objective sight.
Especially, people tend to ignore and blame with close relationship since it is hard to keep objective mind in personal relationships.
Given that the affects of relationships in life, it is crucial for people to make positive relationships with others.

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Thank you for your homework, Yu Jin!

Keep up the good work!

-Hanna ^^

I believe that the seed of conflict is started from the assumption that my opinion is correct and opposites are inccorect.

>>I believe that the seed of conflict often begins with the assumption that my opinion is correct and opposing views are incorrect.

We can prevent small arguments from being emotional conflicts by listening to opposite opinion with objective sight.

>>We can prevent minor disagreements from escalating into emotional conflicts by actively listening to opposing opinions with an objective perspective. 
Especially, people tend to ignore and blame with close relationship since it is hard to keep objective mind in personal relationships.

>>In personal relationships, people may tend to ignore or blame each other as it becomes challenging to maintain objectivity.
Given that the affects of relationships in life, it is crucial for people to make positive relationships with others.

>>Given the significant impact of relationships in life, it is crucial for people to foster positive connections with others.

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