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Two different ways to cook potatoes.

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There are a lot of different ways to cook potatoes.
However, I don't know how to cook potatoes, so I searched it on the internet.
I'll explain two ways to you.
The first is to fry potatoes.
It just cut potatoes in the right size and fry in oil.
Then, french fries are finish.
The second is to boil potatoes.
We called that 'braised potatoes'.
To make that, we should boil potatoes until the water is gone.

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Hi Julie!
The correct terms are important here.
They could be used to express the exact meaning of your thoughts. 
Read them over and practice them.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There are a lot of different ways to cook potatoes.
>> Correct
However, I don't know how to cook potatoes, so I searched it on the internet.
>> Correct
I'll explain two ways to you.
>> Correct
The first is to fry potatoes.
>> Correct
It just cut potatoes in the right size and fry in oil.
>> It's just cutting potatoes in the right size and frying them in oil.
Then, french fries are finish.
>> In the end, you've got French fries. 
The second is to boil potatoes.
>> Correct
We called that 'braised potatoes'.
>> We call that 'braised potatoes'.
To make that, we should boil potatoes until the water is gone.
>> Correct
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