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I'm preparing for next year's study with a plan to try the real estate brokerage test again next year.
I was nervous because I failed this test for three years, but I decided to try it again because the adults around me said it would suit you well.
I think this is my biggest adventure right now.

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Hi Da Hye, 

Preparing for next year's study with a plan to try the real estate brokerage test again reflects a commendable determination. Despite facing challenges in the past, your decision to persevere based on the encouragement of those around you is truly inspiring. This endeavor marks your biggest adventure at the moment. 

Wishing you the very best as you prepare for the upcoming year and the real estate brokerage test. Your resilience and positive outlook are commendable qualities. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I'm preparing for next year's study with a plan to try the real estate brokerage test again next year. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I'm preparing for next year's real estate brokerage test with the determination to attempt it again. 

I was nervous because I failed this test for three years, but I decided to try it again because the adults around me said it would suit you well. 

>>I was nervous because I failed this test for three years, but I decided to try it again because the adults around me said it would suit me well. 

I think this is my biggest adventure right now. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I consider this to be my most significant adventure at the moment. 

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