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The most common infectious disease in Korea is respiratory infectious disease.
Especially, at the beginning of spring and autumn, the difference of temperature between morning and night is severe.
So, many people are fragile to respiratory diseases.
Also, influenza viral disease is common during November and December.
People who suffer from influenza virus, show high fever, sore throat, headache, and muscle pain.

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Hi, Stella!
Thank you for taking the time to do your homework. It's almost the same in my country. Even though we don't have four seasons, October to December is the flu season due to fluctuating temperatures.
- T. Caitlyn
The most common infectious disease in Korea is respiratory infectious disease.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: The most common infectious disease in Korea is respiratory infection.
Especially, at the beginning of spring and autumn, the difference of temperature between morning and night is severe.
>> Especially at the beginning of spring and autumn, the temperature difference between morning and night is severe.
So, many people are fragile to respiratory diseases.
>> So, many people are susceptible to respiratory diseases.
Also, influenza viral disease is common during November and December.
>> CORRECT
People who suffer from influenza virus, show high fever, sore throat, headache, and muscle pain.
>> CORRECT
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