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If you were to create your own fashion line, what would be the theme or inspiration behind it?

작성자: 이*윤
2023-11-25 621

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Well, I think it seems like a difficult topic.
Looking at a fashion magazine, I think I'll learn the design from magazine.
If I make my fashion line, I will get inspiration from listening to music, watching dramas or movies, thinking about main character.
For example, in the song "Queencard" by (G)I-DLE, which is a song I often listen to these days, I came up with an image like a confident princess and I think it will create a design by incorporating Harle Quinn, the main character of the movie.
It also seems like a good way to add something traditional and modern and new.
It would be a good idea to decorate your head with things such as traditional jewelry named binyeo and hairpin and wear a beautiful wedding dress.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

A wonderful Sunday, Yun.  Yul, your fashion idea is really interesting. It combines a strong princess look with inspiration from "(G)I-DLE's Queencard." The mix of old and new styles, and the idea of putting traditional jewelry in your hair, make it special and attractive. It is indeed captivating. I like it! Thanks for this, Yun. I'll see you tomorrow! ^^
~T. Jade^^
Homework: If you were to create your own fashion line, what would be the theme or inspiration behind it?
Well, I think it seems like a difficult topic.
>> Correct
Looking at a fashion magazine, I think I'll learn the design from magazine.
>> Looking at a fashion magazine, I think I'll learn the design from the magazine.
>> Looking at a fashion magazine, I think I'll learn about design from the magazine.
If I make my fashion line, I will get inspiration from listening to music, watching dramas or movies, thinking about main character.
>> If I make my fashion line, I will get inspiration from listening to music, watching dramas or movies, and thinking about the main character.
For example, in the song "Queencard" by (G)I-DLE, which is a song I often listen to these days, I came up with an image like a confident princess and I think it will create a design by incorporating Harle Quinn, the main character of the movie.
>> For example, in the song "Queencard" by (G)I-DLE, which is a song I often listen to these days, I came up with an image of a confident princess, and I think it will create a design by incorporating Harley Quinn, the main character of the movie.
It also seems like a good way to add something traditional and modern and new.
>> It also seems like a good way to combine something traditional, modern, and new.
It would be a good idea to decorate your head with things such as traditional jewelry named binyeo and hairpin and wear a beautiful wedding dress.
>> It would be a good idea to decorate your head with things such as traditional jewelry named Binyeo and hairpins and wear a beautiful wedding dress.
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