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What\'s the most important thing to do to handle and accept change in today\'s fast-paced world?

작성자: 김*경
2023-11-24 1158

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Above all, we need to take it easy and go easy on fast-pace changing world. Sometimes, we have to chill out our strained mind and enjoy the ride in the back seat rather than to struggle to catch up with the world with all strength. The thing is that there are many pundits coercing us not to fall behind the trend at all. However, you know what? Those pundits just can make their own comments about it, but they don’t know and can’t make sure what the future holds for us. To put it bluntly, their all prospects could be shots in the dark. Therefore, we need a wait and see attitude in the rapidly changing world.

For better preparation for the change, we need to be more into human’s inherent instinct because it is a human being who drives the change. We had best study who human being is so that we can guess what the world would originate in the end. As always, the key to all problems is in nothing but people. This is why we should Learn humanities in the technology-driven era all the more.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

A wonderful Sunday, Steve. Handling and accepting change in today's fast-paced world indeed requires a calm and adaptable mindset. Thanks for the solid advice for navigating the fast-paced world. Well done with this, Steve. Take care!
~T. Jade^^
Homework: What's the most important thing to do to handle and accept change in today's fast-paced world?
Above all, we need to take it easy and go easy on fast-pace changing world. 
>> Above all, we need to take it easy and go easy on the fast-paced, changing world.
Sometimes, we have to chill out our strained mind and enjoy the ride in the back seat rather than to struggle to catch up with the world with all strength. 
>> Sometimes, we have to chill out our strained minds and enjoy the ride in the back seat rather than struggle to catch up with the world with all our strength.
The thing is that there are many pundits coercing us not to fall behind the trend at all. 
>> Correct
However, you know what? 
>> Correct
Those pundits just can make their own comments about it, but they don’t know and can’t make sure what the future holds for us. 
>> Correct
To put it bluntly, their all prospects could be shots in the dark. 
>> Correct
Therefore, we need a wait and see attitude in the rapidly changing world.
>> Therefore, we need a wait-and-see attitude in this rapidly changing world.
For better preparation for the change, we need to be more into human’s inherent instinct because it is a human being who drives the change. 
>> For better preparation for the change, we need to be more in tune with humans' inherent instincts because it is a human being who drives the change.
We had best study who human being is so that we can guess what the world would originate in the end. 
>> We had better study who a human being is so that we could guess where the world would originate in the end.
As always, the key to all problems is in nothing but people. 
>> As always, the key to all problems is nothing but people.
This is why we should Learn humanities in the technology-driven era all the more.
>> This is why we should learn the humanities in the technology-driven era all the more.
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