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What is the advantages of working in the hotel industries?

작성자: 정*환
2023-11-24 1931

회원님의 영작문

D-22
It is almost the date of interview.
I can feel both exciting and nervous. I always imagine actual interview and what is the interviewers look like, what questions they ask me.
I tried to collect the real questions from reviews on the website. As a result, I realized the No.1 question which took place for several time from the reviews was "what is the advantages of working in the hotel industries"
We've already talked about this as you know. I was surprised with your prediction.
Even though we have talked about this, by trying this question again, I'm sure it will make me feel comfortable for the actual interview.

There are numerous benefits of working in the hotel industry.
In my experience, I had many chances to speak with foreigners whose mother language is English.
Because I like to speak English as a hobby, I can enjoy working by interacting with them.
Particularly, privileges are available such as using sauna, swimming pool for free or staying hotel's room with discount.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello,Han!
I am very happy with your provided answer. It was well said! I hope you were at ease when you practiced answering this question since we already encountered this in our class.
-Chammy

D-22
It is almost the date of interview.
>> It is almost the date of the interview.
OR
>> My interview is fast approaching.
I can feel both exciting and nervous. I always imagine actual interview and what is the interviewers look like, what questions they ask me.
>> I feel both excited and nervous. I always imagine an actual interview and what the interviewers look like, what questions they ask me.
I tried to collect the real questions from reviews on the website. As a result, I realized the No.1 question which took place for several time from the reviews
>>I tried to collect the real questions from the reviews on the website. As a result, I realized the top question which appeared several times in the reviews
was "what is the advantages of working in the hotel industries"
>> It was, "what is the advantage of working in the hotel industry"
We've already talked about this as you know. I was surprised with your prediction.
>>We've already talked about this as you know. I was surprised by your prediction.
Even though we have talked about this, by trying this question again, I'm sure it will make me feel comfortable for the actual interview.
>>Correct
There are numerous benefits of working in the hotel industry.
In my experience, I had many chances to speak with foreigners whose mother language is English.
Because I like to speak English as a hobby, I can enjoy working by interacting with them.
>>Correct
Particularly, privileges are available such as using sauna, swimming pool for free or staying hotel's room with discount
>>Particularly, privileges are available such as the free use of the sauna and swimming pool as well as staying in the hotel's room with an employee's discount.


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