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Do you think that organic food is much better than normal food or are they about the same?

Yes. I think organic food is much better for human and earth both of them.
Organic foods are not processed using irradiation and industrial solvent. This factors contaminate soil. And Organism living there also are influenced by them. Also argicultural chemicals can change human¡¯s DNA.

Therefore, I think when foods are more closer to nature, they are more fresh and healthier to earth, organism and human.

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That's on point, Heather! I am amazed by the fact that you were able to express this process vividly. Stay healthy!-Faith-
Do you think that organic food is much better than normal food or are they about the same?
>> CORRECT
Yes. I think organic food is much better for human and earth both of them.
>> Yes. I think organic food is much better for both humans and the earth.
Organic foods are not processed using irradiation and industrial solvent. 
>> CORRECT
OR Organic foods mean the absence of irradiation and industrial solvent utilization. 
This factors contaminate soil. 
>> These factors contaminate soil. 
And Organism living there also are influenced by them. 
>> Moreover, the organism living there also is influenced by them. 
Also argicultural chemicals can change human¡¯s DNA.
>> Also, agricultural chemicals can change human DNA.
Therefore, I think when foods are more closer to nature, they are more fresh and healthier to earth, organism and human.
>>Therefore, I think when foods are closer to nature, they are fresher and healthier to the earth, organism and humans.
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