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When we loan from financial institutions, credit is the most important factor.

So unfortunately low level credit people can't lend money there.

That makes vicious circulation in Korea society.

Even though government eradicate illegal private lender, they never disappear.

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Good afternoon to you, Ms. Lily!
This is really sad. In society, there are people who don't have any problem with money, while some always struggle with where can they get money. and when they finally come to a lending institution, bad people take advantage of their situation.
Thank you for this.
Aki~


When we loan from financial institutions, credit is the most important factor.
>>>  CORRECT!

So unfortunately low-level credit people can't lend money there.
>>>  CORRECT!

That makes vicious circulation in Korea society.
>>> That makes vicious circulation in Korean society.

Even though government eradicate illegal private lender, they never disappear.
>>> Even though the government eradicated illegal private lenders, they never disappeared.

Because the demand always exist everywhere.
>>> Because the demand always exists everywhere.
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