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What was the movie you saw that had a great impact on your life?

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Q. What was the movie you saw that had a great impact on your life?

A. Movie that had a great impact on my life is the 'insideout' from pixar.
My job have deal with emotions. I thought emotions are very complicate and difficult things.
But In movie, emotions can be characters that was interesting.
So I could understand all of emotions and that was came to me easily.
That's why this movie impact on my life.
In 2024's The movie 'insideout 2' will coming out!
I'm looking forward to it!

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Hello, Angela!
I know that you are busy and I appreciate that you spend your precious time doing your homework. There are movies that impact our lives because it might be related to our previous experiences or because we see ourselves in the character. Have a good day!
Aki~

 Movie that had a great impact on my life is the 'insideout' from Pixar.
>>> The movie that had a great impact on my life is The Inside-Out' from Pixar.

My job have deal with emotions. I thought emotions are very complicate and difficult things.
>>> My job has to deal with emotions. I thought emotions were very complicated and difficult things.

But In movie, emotions can be characters that was interesting.
>>> But in the movie, emotions can be characters that are interesting.

So I could understand all of emotions and that was came to me easily.
>>> So I could understand all of my emotions and that came to me easily.

That's why this movie impact on my life.
>>>That's why this movie impact my life.

In 2024's The movie 'insideout 2' will coming out!
>> In 2024, The movie 'Inside-out 2' will be coming out!

I'm looking forward to it!
>>> CORRECT!
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