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Outsourcing, complaint

작성자: 정*환
2023-11-23 1186

회원님의 영작문

Chammy.
I checked what outsourcing means based on the fact.
I found out the things about outsourcing I guessed was wrong.
I fixed it again. This homework will make me feel confidently when I get the questions which is even not familiar with.

What's the outsourcing?
We call it a third party which can perform certain tasks, handle operations and offer services.
It would be necessary for the head office to manage with cutting the cost and improve their services by assigning to a third party company.
Head office employees can focus on their tasks by assigning outsourcing company and make their business more effectively.
Head office should pay for the fee to outsourcing companies.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Han,
I guess today's answer is better than yesterday. ^_^ Btw, I also asked you why it lowers the cost when we hire third parties. This is because companies can save the budget for the equipment, training, and software for in-house employees. They are already the third party's concern. ^_^
-Chammy

Chammy.
I checked what outsourcing means based on the fact.
>>I checked what outsourcing means based on the facts
.
I found out the things about outsourcing I guessed was wrong.
>>I found out the things about outsourcing and I guess I was wrong.

I fixed it again. This homework will make me feel confidently when I get the questions which is even not familiar with.
>>I fixed it again. This homework will make me feel confident when I get the questions that am unfamiliar with.

What's the outsourcing?
We call it a third party which can perform certain tasks, handle operations and offer services.
>>We call it a third party that can perform certain tasks, handle operations, and offer services.

It would be necessary for the head office to manage with cutting the cost and improve their services by assigning to a third party company.
>>It would be necessary for the head office to cut costs and improve their services by hiring a third-party company.

Head office employees can focus on their tasks by assigning outsourcing company and make their business more effectively.
>>Head office employees can focus on their tasks by assigning outsourcing companies and making their business more effective.

Head office should pay for the fee to outsourcing companies.
>>Head office should pay the fee to outsourcing companies.
OR
>> The head office will still pay for the third-party services but lower than its in-house labor costs. 
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