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My motivation of running is pear. I am worried that I won't be able to run same as now. I wanted to die with running if I could chose how to die. I know the benefits of running. I ran last night. I have stated to run again.

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Hello, Thomas!

I am very happy that you made this decision to run again. It is what you love to do, then, you need to run and burn those calories and release your happy hormones!

We need to do the things that make us happy when we are young and able because life is short.

I hope that you will run again today. Tell me about it tomorrow.

Below, you got some sentences correctly. For the sentences that have suggestions, study them carefully and remember their patterns.

See you again! Happy running today!

-T. Donna~

My motivation of running is pear. 
>> My motivation of running is my pears

I am worried that I won't be able to run same as now. 
>> I am worried that I won't be able to run the same as now. 

I wanted to die with running if I could chose how to die. 
>> Correct!
Or: I wanted to die running if I could choose how to die.

I know the benefits of running. I ran last night. I have stated to run again.
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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