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I love Boracay
It's far from here but It's very beatiful.
There are good restaurant and bar.
There is beach near the resort.
So It's very comforterble and convenient.
It's couldn't be better.

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Hi Jessica,
Boracay is a beautiful place indeed. Thank you for appreciating it. See you later :)
~ T. Demi ^^


I love Boracay.
>>CORRECT!
It's far from here but It's very beatiful.
>> It's quite far from here but it's very beautiful.
There are good restaurant and bar.
>> There are good restaurants and bars.
There is beach near the resort.
>> There is a beach near the restaurant.
So It's very comforterble and convenient.
>> So, it's very comfortable and convenient.
It's couldn't be better.
>> It couldn't be better.
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