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Since I believe that professional individuals have common key characters, I've been making effort to gain these characters.
They have competencies like specialized communication, logical thinking and creativeness and utilize materials fluently when they need.
These abilities aren't given in one's birrh, but they have spent a lot of times for cultivating.
I also hope to be regarded as a person who is professional in worklife by engaging in meetings with other teams frequently and devising the report's storyline.

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Thank you for your homework, Yu Jin!

Way to go!

-Hanna ^^

Since I believe that professional individuals have common key characters, I've been making effort to gain these characters.

>>Since I believe that professional individuals have common key characters, I've been making efforts to gain these characters.

They have competencies like specialized communication, logical thinking and creativeness and utilize materials fluently when they need.

>>They possess competencies such as specialized communication, logical thinking, and creativity, and they can fluently utilize materials when needed.
These abilities aren't given in one's birrh, but they have spent a lot of times for cultivating.

>>These abilities are not inherent at birth but are developed over time through dedicated cultivation. 

I also hope to be regarded as a person who is professional in worklife by engaging in meetings with other teams frequently and devising the report's storyline.

>>I also aspire to be recognized as a professional in my work life by actively engaging in meetings with other teams and crafting compelling storylines for reports.

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