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What jobs in your country are considered to be good jobs? Why?
: I think it is not only South Korea but also most of countries that doctors and lawyers are considered to be good jobs.
people respect the jobs to have to study hard such as judges, lawyers, doctors, dentist, and pharmacist.
To become the respectful jobs, the people have to get a master degree or doctor degree at an university and take a difficult test for the license.

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Hi Shin! Thank you for taking the time to complete your homework despite your busy schedule. Well done on accomplishing your assignments.
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara


I think it is not only South Korea but also most of countries that doctors and lawyers are considered to be good jobs.
>>> I think it is not only in South Korea but also in most countries that doctors and lawyers are considered good jobs.
people respect the jobs to have to study hard such as judges, lawyers, doctors, dentist, and pharmacist.
>>> People respect jobs that require hard study, such as judges, lawyers, doctors, dentists, and pharmacists.
To become the respectful jobs, the people have to get a master degree or doctor degree at an university and take a difficult test for the license.
>>> To enter these respected professions, people have to earn a master's or doctorate degree at a university and pass a difficult licensure exam.
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