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Sometimes, I tend to skip taking vitamins, but I try to take vitamins everyday as possible as I can.
It is well known that vitamin C is good for oral ulcer and mucositis.
Also, vitamin B and C is great for chronic fatigue.
Recently, many people are interested in supplemental vitamin D, because it is effective for anti-aging
In my case, I usually take vitamin B and C. I feel much better and less exhausted after taking vitamin.
Scientifically, vitamins are needed to metabolize major nutrients.
Although we can supplement vitamins from meals, taking vitamins directly will help to fulfill lacking vitamins.

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Hi, Stella!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with you. Nowadays, people pay more attention to their health and have been interested in supplements, whether for health or beauty. It's nice to know that you take these vitamins as well to take care of yourself.
- T. Caitlyn
Sometimes, I tend to skip taking vitamins, but I try to take vitamins everyday as possible as I can.
>> Sometimes, I tend to skip taking vitamins, but I try to take them every day as much as possible.
It is well known that vitamin C is good for oral ulcer and mucositis.
>> It is well known that vitamin C is good for treating oral ulcers and mucositis.
Also, vitamin B and C is great for chronic fatigue.
>> Also, vitamin B and C are great for chronic fatigue.
Recently, many people are interested in supplemental vitamin D, because it is effective for anti-aging
>> Recently, many people have been interested in supplemental vitamin D because it is effective for anti-aging.
In my case, I usually take vitamin B and C. 
>> CORRECT
I feel much better and less exhausted after taking vitamin.
>> CORRECT
Scientifically, vitamins are needed to metabolize major nutrients.
>> CORRECT
Although we can supplement vitamins from meals, taking vitamins directly will help to fulfill lacking vitamins.
>> Although we can get vitamins from meals, taking them directly in supplement form can help fulfill any deficiencies.
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