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Q: How do tortoises contribute to the environment?
A: I think they contribute to the environment by eating the sea grasses.
Actually, sea grasses can be dangerous to the environment if they are too much in the sea, and tortoises eat them.
And I think that is good for fish.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to take note of:

1. I think they contribute to the environment by eating the sea grasses.
>>I think they contribute to the environment by eating the seagrasses.

2. Actually, sea grasses can be dangerous to the environment if they are too much in the sea, and tortoises eat them.
>>Seagrasses can be dangerous to the environment if there are too much of them in the sea, and tortoises eat them.

3. And I think that is good for fish.
>>Also, I think that it is good for some fish.

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