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which activities do you think you still need to work on developing to become a better hotel employe

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2023-11-20 405

회원님의 영작문

Today, I was able to answer from your question based on my experience.
That made me speak more fluently than the questions in which were not on my experience.
Actually, I saw the interview reviews on the website. And I found out my questions from them.
Some of them are not out of my business such as situations at front desk.
But I can't stop for my self improvement. Now I am thinking I just started and have many things to do for the interview.
Whenever I got the questions, I always feel nervous however I will keep practicing until I don't feel nervous.

I think the communication with customers is the most necessary to develop for myself.
The hotel services are based on the manpower so interacting with people is one of the important elements to become a better hotel employee.
And it can also be helpful for not even hotel industry because human can't live without communication.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Han!
Even if you realize that we still have a lot to work on, be positive and think that we have already made significant progress. Remember that we need to attract positivity and negativities are not welcome. hihihi ^___^
Chammy
Today, I was able to answer from your question based on my experience.
>>Today, I was able to answer your question based on my experience.
That made me speak more fluently than the questions in which were not on my experience.
>>That made me speak more fluently than the questions which were not in my experience.
Actually, I saw the interview reviews on the website. And I found out my questions from them.
>>Actually, I saw the interview reviews on the website. And I found out some questions from them.
Some of them are not out of my business such as situations at front desk.
>>Some of them are out of my business such as situations at the front desk.
But I can't stop for my self improvement. Now I am thinking I just started and have many things to do for the interview.
>>But I can't stop for my self-improvement. Now I think I just started and have many things to do for the interview.
Whenever I got the questions, I always feel nervous however I will keep practicing until I don't feel nervous.
>>Whenever I get the questions, I always feel nervous however I will keep practicing until I don't feel it anymore.
I think the communication with customers is the most necessary to develop for myself.
>>I think communication with customers is the most necessary aspect I have to develop for myself.
The hotel services are based on the manpower so interacting with people is one of the important elements to become a better hotel employee.
>>The hotel services are based on manpower so interacting with people is one of the important elements to become a better hotel employee.
And it can also be helpful for not even hotel industry because human can't live without communication.
>>And it can also be helpful not just for the hotel industry because humans can't live without communication.
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