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I had a debate competition. It was a debate competition that people has to be prepared for it, I do not have much time so I just have 3days to prepare. Because one of the student who experienced debate competition last year implied to us that we just need to prepare two topic, we prepare two topic in forum of aisan parilimentry debate. However, when I go to academy they, told us that we have to prepare all three topic and also because we got disadvantage that cannont participate in 1round, our team failed to had a good score. It was eally sad

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Good day, Jude! I'm sorry to hear that you lost the debate. Better luck next time. But it is good to know that you prepare for the competition. Even if you didn't win, I know that you did your best. Cheer up and next time you will win the debate competition. Have a good one and take care always. ~T. Lyn
I had a debate competition. 
>>We had a debate competition.
It was a debate competition that people has to be prepared for it, I do not have much time so I just have 3days to prepare. 
>>It was a debate competition that required a lot of preparation, but there wasn't much time, so I only had three days to prepare.
Because one of the student who experienced debate competition last year implied to us that we just need to prepare two topic, we prepare two topic in forum of aisan parilimentry debate. 
>>One of the students who participated in the debate competition last year told us that we only need to prepare two topics, so we prepared two topics in the for of an Asian Congress debate.
However, when I go to academy they, told us that we have to prepare all three topic and also because we got disadvantage that cannont participate in 1round, our team failed to had a good score. 
>>However, when we went to the academy, they told us that we had to prepare for all three topics or subjects, and we were disadvantaged from not being able to participate in the first round, so our team didn't perform well and failed to have a good score.
It was eally sad
>>It was a really sad experience.
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