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What kind of boss would you want to be if you had your own company?

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I want to be a generous boss. No one does well from the beginning. So I think people need generous mind when their employees have some mistakes. I believe this culture makes the elders' love for the young,

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Hello there, Hyebhin!
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Mistakes allow you to develop character while also recognizing that you are human and make mistakes. To correct these errors, you must first modify yourself. When you are able to reflect on your own mistakes, you can share your knowledge with others.

I will see you in our next class.

__T. Mayleen :)


I want to be a generous boss.
>>> CORRECT
No one does well from the beginning.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Nobody succeeds from the start.
So I think people need generous mind when their employees have some mistakes.
>>> So I think people need a generous mind when their employees make mistakes.
I believe this culture makes the elders' love for the young,
>>> I believe this culture is born out of elders' love for the younger generation.
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