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Do you think Korea has good or bad politics? How can you say so?

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I think Korea's politics is still bad. but it's better than past politics.
In 1960's to 1980's, we were experienced for solider's government.
It was bad memory in Korea, but now we have freedom.

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I think Korea's politics is still bad. but it's better than past politics.
>> I think Korea's politics is still bad but it's better now compared to our previous government.

In 1960's to 1980's, we were experienced for solider's government.
>> From the 1960s to the 1980s, we experienced a lot of terrible things from the soldiers under the government. 

It was bad memory in Korea, but now we have freedom.
>> It was really a bad experience for Koreans and it is such a relief that we have more freedom and a better government now. 
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