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How can you help someone who suffers from the effects of his or her vices?


I will listen to their mind first. "How does he live", "How's the feeling these day".... I try to understand their situation.

and if i have the experience about that vice, i will talk my experience.

If i don't have the experience, i will find the information to help him escape that vice by youtube, books, other people....

Do you have good idea for this??? If this is real, it may be very very difficult !

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Thank you for your honest thoughts. No doubt your way is better. I would definitely just advise my friend to seek professional help and show my support unconditionally. -Faith-
How can you help someone who suffers from the effects of his or her vices?
>> CORRECT
I will listen to their mind first. 
>> I will listen to their minds first. 
"How does he live",
>> For example, "How does he live?"
 "How's the feeling these day".... 
>> "How is he feeling these days?"
I try to understand their situation.
>> It is one way to understand his situation.
and if i have the experience about that vice, i will talk my experience.
>> Also, if I had the experience of that vice, I would talk about it.
If i don't have the experience, i will find the information to help him escape that vice by youtube, books, other people....
>> If I did not have that experience, I would find information to help him escape from that vice by YouTube, books, and other people.
Do you have good idea for this??? 
>> Do you have good ideas for this?
If this is real, it may be very very difficult !
>> If this were real, it might be very difficult!
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