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Because each person has different reasons for exercising, you need to find out the person's needs and discuss them. Some people recommend regular exercise and diet in combination with diet to lose weight, while others recommend exercising passionately to overcome stress, depression, or insomnia, and working out in a place full of energetic people. It will be recommended that you can get a good sleep while your body is in a comfortable state by sharing energy or releasing energy.

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Hi Eliana!
You were on point! We have various reasons for exercising. Maybe for me now, is for good health, losing eight is just secondary.
Thank you for this. 
Aki~

Because each person has different reasons for exercising, you need to find out the person's needs and discuss them.
>> CORRECT!

Some people recommend regular exercise and diet in combination with diet to lose weight, while others recommend exercising passionately to overcome stress, depression, or insomnia, and working out in a place full of energetic people.
>> CORRECT!

It will be recommended that you can get a good sleep while your body is in a comfortable state by sharing energy or releasing energy.
>>> It will be recommended that you get a good sleep while your body is in a comfortable state by sharing energy or releasing energy.
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