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HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about ¡°What is the weirdest memory that you ever had in school? Can you explain what happened? ¡±

I don¡¯t think it was my experience, but the weirdest thing I've ever seen was the lock for the roof.
The door to the roof was locked, but the lock was actually fake.
Knowing that, my friends also enjoyed the thrill of going to the rooftop without my teacher knowing.

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I don¡¯t think it was my experience, but the weirdest thing I've ever seen was the lock for the roof.
>> It was not my experience, but the weirdest thing I've ever seen in our school was the door going to the roof. 

The door to the roof was locked, but the lock was actually fake.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> The door going to the roof was locked, but the lock was actually fake.

Knowing that, my friends also enjoyed the thrill of going to the rooftop without my teacher knowing.
>>  Because of that, my friends enjoyed the thrill of going to the rooftop without my teacher knowing.
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