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Positive mindset

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2023-11-15 2043

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I think my positive mindset is the most valuable trait that I have.
When I believe that the situation will flow in positive way, It can make me more motivated and focus on things.
Also, even though I'm in challenging situation, the positive mindset give me resilience, which get it through and catch the new possibility.
In addition, I may gain a good reputation since I deliver the positive energy to others.

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Thank you for your homework, Yu Jin!

Your dedication will bring you to success!

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I think my positive mindset is the most valuable trait that I have.

>>Correct.
When I believe that the situation will flow in positive way, It can make me more motivated and focus on things.

>>When I believe that a situation will unfold positively, it motivates me and helps me stay focused.
Also, even though I'm in challenging situation, the positive mindset give me resilience, which get it through and catch the new possibility.

>>Also, even though I'm in a challenging situation, positive mindset gives me resilience that helps me get through and catch a new possibility.

In addition, I may gain a good reputation since I deliver the positive energy to others.

>>Correct.

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