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Hi faith! It's been a while since I did my homework. ^^;;;

Q. What do you think you are accountable for these days?

I want to finish my 2023 writing class well. It has started since this feburary. At that time, I determined that I try to understand the world and people more than before by reading classical books and writing essays from books.

But as time pass by, it is being difficult for me to read books and write my essay. So I has been neglected the study gradually since this summer.

My final essay dead line is coming soon. I remember what was my first intention. I will do my best for having no regards.

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Hi, Heather! You must have been on the go because of your essay. Don't worry about it. Thank you for your honest answer.
 -Faith-
Hi faith! It's been a while since I did my homework. ^^;;;
>> Hi, Faith! It has been a while since I did my homework.
Q. What do you think you are accountable for these days?
>> CORRECT
I want to finish my 2023 writing class well. 
>> CORRECT
It has started since this feburary. 
>> It has started since February this year. 
At that time, I determined that I try to understand the world and people more than before by reading classical books and writing essays from books.
>> At that time, I was determined to try to understand the world and people more than before by reading classical books and writing essays from books.
But as time pass by, it is being difficult for me to read books and write my essay. 
>> However, as time passes by, it is difficult for me to read books and write my essays. 
So I has been neglected the study gradually since this summer.
>> Therefore, I have neglected my study gradually since this summer.
My final essay dead line is coming soon. 
>> My final essay deadline is coming soon. 
OR My final essay deadline is around the corner.
I remember what was my first intention. 
>> Now, I try to remember what my first intention was. 
I will do my best for having no regards.
>> I will do my best this time for I had no regards for it at first.
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