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How far into the future would you like to travel? What do you hope to see?

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2023-11-15 1441

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To your dismay, I don’t have any future to see in advance, I don’t defy my desire to see the future, such as what it would be my children’s lives after my death, or what the future world looks like in 100 years. The reason why I don’t want to see the future is simple. Namely, I don’t want to ruin my motivation to live my current life expecting more for the future. You know, if I were to know what the future turns out to be, I couldn’t be motivated to live fervently as I do. However, if I have to say one thing, I want to know when God will permit my big investment in Busan to come to fruition because that is in my prayers all the time nowadays.
But, as I mentioned earlier, I am not that much into the future. Moreover, I believe the future which is likely to happen can change according to what I am doing here at the moment. In some respect, I think there is no such a thing as the future or the past, but the present. Anyway, thanks for your thought-provoking topic all the time.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Steve! You're welcome! I like posting thought-provoking questions to help enhance your critical thinking, creativity, and reasoning. You made a few corrections, which is excellent, and I sent some other revisions. Well done!
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara

To your dismay, I don’t have any future to see in advance, I don’t defy my desire to see the future, such as what it would be my children’s lives after my death, or what the future world looks like in 100 years. 
>>> To your dismay, I don't have any future to see in advance. I don't defy my desire to see the future, such as my children's lives after my death or the appearance of the world in 100 years.
The reason why I don’t want to see the future is simple. 
>>> CORRECT!
Namely, I don’t want to ruin my motivation to live my current life expecting more for the future. 
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> Namely, I don’t want to undermine my motivation to live my current life while anticipating more for the future.
You know, if I were to know what the future turns out to be, I couldn’t be motivated to live fervently as I do. 
>>> CORRECT!
However, if I have to say one thing, I want to know when God will permit my big investment in Busan to come to fruition because that is in my prayers all the time nowadays.
>>> However, if I have to say one thing, I would like to know when God will permit my significant investment in Busan to bear fruit because that is in my prayers all the time nowadays.
But, as I mentioned earlier, I am not that much into the future. 
>>> CORRECT!
Moreover, I believe the future which is likely to happen can change according to what I am doing here at the moment. 
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> Moreover, I believe the future, which is likely to unfold, can change based on what I am doing at the moment.
In some respect, I think there is no such a thing as the future or the past, but the present. 
>>> CORRECT!



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