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I lost my phone for 6days and because it's engagement was not finished, I cannot even change my phone. I was in the bad situation because I cannot do nothing like messenger.so it was really bad. When Iwent to school, I tell this to my friend so they tried to tack my phone however, than, one of my friend said that in my tait, I will just left it at my desk so he search my bags and locker and he shoutted running and there was my phone in his hand, and I was really happy

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Hello Jude, good day to you! I'm happy to hear that you got your phone back. Don't leave your thing unattended next time. Always be careful. We will talk more in class. I will see you then. Have a great day! ~T. Lyn
I lost my phone for 6days and because it's engagement was not finished, I cannot even change my phone. 
>>I lost my phone for 6 days and I can't change it because my contract has not ended.
I was in the bad situation because I cannot do nothing like messenger.so it was really bad. 
>>The situation was bad because I couldn't do or use anything like messenger, it was really bad.
When Iwent to school, I tell this to my friend so they tried to tack my phone however, than, one of my friend said that in my tait, 
>>I went to school and told my friends about this and tried to track my phone but one of them was tight-lipped and said something like that.
I will just left it at my desk so he search my bags and locker and he shoutted running and there was my phone in his hand, and I was really happy
>>I must have just left it on the desk, so he rummaged through my bad and locker and yelled at me to run, and I was so happy to see my phone in his hand.
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