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I have never loaded clothes to my friend. When I was high-school student one of my friends wanted to borrow my clothes but there were no reasons like blind date. So I didn't loan my clothes to him. But he asked it several times.

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Hi there, Thomas!

Clothes are personal belongings. If you are not comfortable to lend them, you should not let any other person use it. I must say, you made a good decision not to lend your clothes to your friend.

Sometimes, our friends do not have the means to buy their own clothes when we are young. They have to learn the lesson of being simple.

Thank you for your homework answer! You are busy today so, I will see you again tomorrow in class.

Take care today!

-T. Donna~

I have never loaded clothes to my friend. 
>> I have never let my friend borrow clothes.

When I was high-school student one of my friends wanted to borrow my clothes but there were no reasons like blind date. 
>> When I was a high-school student one of my friends wanted to borrow my clothes but there were no reasons like blind date. 

So I didn't loan my clothes to him. 
>> So I didn't lend my clothes to him.

But he asked it several times.
>> Correct!
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