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Hello, T.Donna.
How was your day?
I had a peaceful day.
There was quite enough patients and clients, but not too many.
It means enough profit and relatively not too hard work.
My wife came to the clinic at lunch time, so we could have lunch together, and it gave me a joy.
Actually, I hate to have a meal alone; I am certainly sociable and dependent.
After this morning conference, the chief manager gave thanks to me for yesterday's advice about Dr.MJ's birthday celebration text.
She told me that she regretted considering Dr.MJ as a man just like machine.
She is smart and warmhearted, so I think she will support Dr.MJ better.
Of course, she has to prepare for the strong scold from Dr. MJ as well.
My wedding day is coming; November 17th.
To celebrate our memorial day, my wife and I will have a special lunch tomorrow; sushi omakase.
Omakase means course dish.
Regarding my homework, I wish Dr. MJ will be healthy and realize other sources of happiness other than money and food.
See you.

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Hi there, Dr. Kim!

I totally agree that today was a peaceful and a lovely day. I was able to rest all I want and so did you there in your clinic. Your clients and patients were at an average, not bad.

Since your wife came over,  you did not have to eat alone. They say, you have to careful who you eat lunch with. They can influence your on how you will finish the day. In this case, I guess, you were more relaxed and calm facing your wife for some hearty food.

I hope that Dr. MJ had a very good day today after his birthday. Tomorrow when he arrives, he will ask about the welfare of the clinic and by then, cross your fingers that he will be satisfied.

Happy anniversary to you and your wife on the 17th! It's been more than 10 years of blissful marriage and you are both growing stronger and more steadily over time. You serve as a role model to the other doctors who cannot have steadfast and peaceful relationship just like you. You both deserve the Omakase with your wife!

Congratulations for getting all of the sentences of your composition correctly! I am proud of this acheivement.

See you again tomorrow.

-T. Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

How was your day?
>> Correct!

I had a peaceful day.
>> Correct!

There was quite enough patients and clients, but not too many.
>> Correct!

It means enough profit and relatively not too hard work.
>> Correct!

My wife came to the clinic at lunch time, so we could have lunch together, and it gave me a joy.
>> My wife came to the clinic at lunch time, so we could have lunch together, and it gave me joy.

Actually, I hate to have a meal alone; I am certainly sociable and dependent.
>> Correct!

After this morning conference, the chief manager gave thanks to me for yesterday's advice about Dr.MJ's birthday celebration text.
>> Correct!

She told me that she regretted considering Dr.MJ as a man just like machine.
>> Correct!

She is smart and warmhearted, so I think she will support Dr.MJ better.
>> Correct!

Of course, she has to prepare for the strong scold from Dr. MJ as well.
>> Correct!

My wedding day is coming; November 17th.
>> Correct!
Or: My wedding anniversary is on November 17.

To celebrate our memorial day, my wife and I will have a special lunch tomorrow; sushi omakase.
>> Correct!

Omakase means course dish.
>> Correct!

Regarding my homework, I wish Dr. MJ will be healthy and realize other sources of happiness other than money and food.
>> Correct!

See you.
>> Correct!
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