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Seoul's congestion problem is not just mean a subway problem.

Seoul's most problems are the resule of overpopulation.

I can't agree with this ludicuous pilot policy.

It is difficult to say that this is a policy because citizen should endure all inconvenience and unfair .

This policy is regard human as baggage.

Government should solve overpopulation positively. .

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Good day, Ms. Lily!
I would have to agree with you, I guess this policy will only benefit them. removing the seat would mean a lot of people will be catered then additional earnings for the Seoul Metro system, however, they overlooked the weak and aging people who also need to use the subway during rush hours.
Well, let your voice be heard.
Aki~


Seoul's congestion problem is not just mean a subway problem.
>>>  Seoul's congestion problem does not just mean a subway problem.

Seoul's most problems are the resule of overpopulation.
>>>  Seoul's most problems are the result of overpopulation.

I can't agree with this ludicuous pilot policy.
>>> I can't agree with this ludicrous pilot policy.

It is difficult to say that this is a policy because citizen should endure all inconvenience and unfair .
>>> It is difficult to say that this is a policy because citizens should endure all inconveniences and unfairness.

This policy is regard human as baggage.
>>> This policy regards humans as baggage.

Government should solve overpopulation positively.
>>> The government should solve overpopulation positively.
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