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In the age of technology, do you think we\'re better or worse at keeping in touch with others compar

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I think we're keep in touch better now. Because with the development of technology, we can use SNS or chat application more than past.
I often chat with my friends but I can't easily contact all of my friends. So I can see SNS to know what they do nowadays.

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Hi, Hyebin. Absolutely. Utilizing SNS is a huge plus nowadays when it comes to communication. Although not everyone uses it to be more connected with others, unlike you, Hyebin. Unfortunately, even though it has made positive effects on other people, it's vice versa for some. So, I guess it indeed depends on the person. Still, I'm glad you utilize SNS well. That's commendable! ^_^ Thanks for this, Hyebin. Take care always!
~T. Jade^^
I think we're keep in touch better now. 
>> I think we're keeping in touch better now.
Because with the development of technology, we can use SNS or chat application more than past.
>> Because of the development of technology, we can use social media (SNS) or chat applications more than in the past.
I often chat with my friends but I can't easily contact all of my friends. 
>> I often chat with my friends, but I can't easily contact all of them.
So I can see SNS to know what they do nowadays.
>> So, I use social media (SNS) to know what they do nowadays.
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