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How far is your parents\' hometown from the capital?

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My parent's hometown is Busan Korea.
Busan is located at the end of Korea.
So if i start at Seoul, It take to 6-7 hours by car to go to the Busan.
Especially during the holidays it take to 10 hours by car.
If it is difficult to use the car, there is a train called KTX. In addition, there is a airplane.
It take to 3 hours by train to go to the Busan.
And It take to 1 hours by airplane to go to the Busan.
There is a famous Beaches in Busan called Haeundae, like waikiki Beach!

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Hello Angela,
Thank you for sahring this, it's very intersting to know  different places in Korea and how convenient to travel there. By the way, I gave some correction to yor sentences and I hope it can help you do better expressions.
Good day!
Aki~


My parent's hometown is Busan Korea.
>>> CORRECT!

Busan is located at the end of Korea.
>>> Busan is located in the Southern part of South Korea.

So if I start at Seoul, It take to 6-7 hours by car to go to the Busan.
>>>  So if I start in Seoul, It takes 6-7 hours by car to go to Busan.

Especially during the holidays it take to 10 hours by car.
>>> Especially during the holidays it takes up to 10 hours by car.

If it is difficult to use the car, there is a train called KTX.
>>> It is difficult to travel by car so there is also a train called KTX

In addition, there is a airplane.
>>> In addition, we can go there by an airplane.

It take to 3 hours by train to go to the Busan.
>>> It takes 3 hours by train to go to the Busan.

And It take to 1 hours by airplane to go to the Busan.
>>>  But only 1 hour by airplane.

There is a famous Beaches in Busan called Haeundae, like waikiki Beach!
>>> There is a famous beach in Busan called Haeundae and it is like Waikiki Beach.

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