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I believe that changes happen frequently in human life. While there will be huge changes which influence the entire life, there will be natural changes which happen sequentially when we live.
Thus, We need to believe that the situation will be changed since the situation is not a fixed fact, but a flexible evidence though it will flow in negative direction.
In this way, we may deal with the unexpected situation more fluently.

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Thank you for your homework, Yu Jin!

Keep thriving and you'll make it!

-Hanna ^^

I believe that changes happen frequently in human life. 

>>Correct.

While there will be huge changes which influence the entire life, there will be natural changes which happen sequentially when we live.

>>While there may be significant changes that influence our entire lives, there are also natural changes that occur sequentially as we live.
Thus, We need to believe that the situation will be changed since the situation is not a fixed fact, but a flexible evidence though it will flow in negative direction.

>>Thus, we need to believe that the situation can change since the situation is not a fixed fact, but a flexible evidence though it will flow in a negative direction.

In this way, we may deal with the unexpected situation more fluently.

>>Correct.

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