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회원님의 영작문

I wasn't be able to clarify what I wanted to say this morning.
The scrifice would be necessary for other employees to be leaded from leaders.
Most tasks are hassles.
If leaders try to do it first, it can make other employees to do by themselves as well.
That was what I wanted to say to you.

Equal service for every customers is very important in my opinion.
Even some customers who look poor are also guest. They have also qualification to stay in the hotel with payment.
Hotels are spending a lot of money for the advertisements. That is for people whoever visit. If hotels get people who look poor lower service, it can be affected negatively on the internet.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Han,
Even if you believed the expression was unclear, it seems like I understood it. Leaders must occasionally make sacrifices. right? Your response to my questions, on the other hand, was correct. Particularly since you stated that the advertisement is for everyone! Furthermore, we shouldn't judge a person only on their outward appearance. Some wealthy people do not dress elegantly. ^__^
-Chammy
I wasn't be able to clarify what I wanted to say this morning.
>>I wasn't able to clarify what I wanted to say this morning.
The scrifice would be necessary for other employees to be leaded from leaders.
>>The sacrifice would be necessary for other employees to be led by leaders.
OR
>>Leaders would need to sacrifice something when leading employees. 
Most tasks are hassles.
>>Correct
If leaders try to do it first, it can make other employees to do by themselves as well.
>>If leaders try to do it first, it can make other employees do it by themselves as well.
OR
>> In an instance, some things needed to be tried by leaders first so employees could do it by themselves as well.
That was what I wanted to say to you.
>>Correct
Equal service for every customers is very important in my opinion.
>>Equal service for every customer is very important in my opinion.
Even some customers who look poor are also guest. They have also qualification to stay in the hotel with payment.
>>Even some customers who look poor are also guests. They have also the qualification to stay in the hotel with payment.
OR
>>People who appear poor are also guests. They are eligible to stay at a hotel for a fee.
Hotels are spending a lot of money for the advertisements. That is for people whoever visit. If hotels get people who look poor lower service, it can be affected negatively on the internet.
>>Hotels are spending a lot of money on advertisements. That is for people who would visit. If hotels give lower service to people who look poor, it can affect negatively the internet.

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